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love-hate poem by ~krazy-kay:iconkrazy-kay:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Old Poetry Structure > Emotional


Love/Hate Poem

your perfect face,
your sweet embrace,
your gorgeous eyes,
your mind so wise,
your precious heart,
your look so smart,
your melting smile,
i'd walk a mile
to be with you again

your angry face,
your hurtful embrace,
your evil eyes,
your thoughts i despise,
your devalued heart,
your plan's not smart,
your cringing smile,
i'd run a mile
to leave you again

your face is a blur,
your sleeping with her,
your as evil as hell,
and your under her spell,
i hate you for this,
what happened to the bliss?,
i no longer live,
and that i cannot forgive
i lay here in the rain,
i hate you for this pain.
©2003-2009 ~krazy-kay
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Author's Comments

this poem was on my mate vampant's page. i wrote it and got him to put it on for me before i got an account.
hope u like :D
this was just things goin round in my head one confusing night.

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~vampant Aug 28, 2003, 5:32:26 PM
its great work well done i think i will fav it cos it does get across well what she wants to no
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~vampant Aug 28, 2003, 5:33:50 PM
what she want to i mean
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~littlesu Aug 29, 2003, 3:15:51 AM
wow u spelt out everything for a woman. hehehe nicely done
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~krazy-kay Aug 29, 2003, 3:30:01 AM
hey thanx for the comment, think that poem shows what was mixed up in my mind lol
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~littlesu Aug 29, 2003, 3:31:02 AM
hehe well it was nicely put together
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~krazy-kay Aug 29, 2003, 3:38:34 AM
thanx, ill have some more on the site soon just tryin to correct all of the ones iv donbe, cant seem to make them make sense :S
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!hasaphobia Aug 29, 2003, 3:46:34 PM
u alway to fullfil wot i want to read i already no wot its like to be inside ur head but i just seem to find more about u and i want more to the way u put it all together made me want to look at it again thankx sexy kay xxx
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=rakie Aug 30, 2003, 3:48:02 AM
I read it before on Antons page, i think its awesome, i dunno how to word what i was gonna say so i'll try my luck with emoticons :
:D :clap: :tears: :devilish: ok... maybe that didnt work, oh well, the poems great!! (there damnit) lol sorry....

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"You can't give up hope just because its hopeless, you gotta cover your ears and go blablablalablabla!!"
Captain Rake Fluffy Butterwhiskers Silly Butt *grin* o.O
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~krazy-kay Aug 30, 2003, 8:26:21 AM
thanx for the comment, emoticons sorta put across what u wanna say lol
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